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There is dew glistening on plants, like tears
There are voices in the distance -
I feel deserted
There is the sharp snap of twigs beneath an intruder’s feet
The sun shining through the treetops
Awakens
And revives me
There is a violent rustling of the leaves in the wind
They make me feel as though others are sneaking through
these sacred woods
of mine
In this private gazebo, I am at home
         in my own private place
In the ancient, fragile, withered and worn
black oak
This is my favorite time of year –
When all the trees and leaves are changing….
Metamorphic
Magical
Unnatural
As the brook flowed, rushing
The secretive purple loosestrife
Prevented peering, invasive eyes
In the pathway
Blocking, unmovable
The very ancient
   Fragile
Innocent souls.
:icondusk-of-stars:

Author's Comments

Hmm... I don't think the format is what I wanted, but atleast all the words are there.

I wrote this for English class a while ago... What do you think??

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:iconmossflower16998:
me likey!

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"If you choke a Smurf, what colour does it turn?"

~Good ol' Je-fa-fa DunHAM Haha...
:icondawnlilly81:
very well written! you should post more poems! :clap:

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Spread the <3

"And I could tell you his favorite colors green
He loves to argue, born on the seventeenth
His sister's beautiful, he has his father's eyes
And if you ask me if I love him, I'd lie."

~Taylor Swift, I'd Lie

<3 <3 <3
:iconplatinummyr:
I like. :)

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*TheWritersMeow
A birthday is just a day, you say.
But it's a special day.
It's the day you first changed the world.
:icondusk-of-stars:
thanks! I will try

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Hello there
The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim
Of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:
:icondusk-of-stars:
:D Yay!

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Hello there
The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim
Of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:
:icondusk-of-stars:
Thank You!!

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Hello there
The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim
Of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:
:icondawnlilly81:
:)

--
Spread the <3

"And I could tell you his favorite colors green
He loves to argue, born on the seventeenth
His sister's beautiful, he has his father's eyes
And if you ask me if I love him, I'd lie."

~Taylor Swift, I'd Lie

<3 <3 <3
:iconegorequiem:
i really like the imaging on the whole thing, every word is so vivid and descriptive, i love it!

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George´s law of rightness: i can either be right or not as right as i´d like, and if i´m not as right as i´d like, and i do apologize, so i´m not pompous or anything, even though most of the times i am right! so most of the time i don´t apologize.
:icondusk-of-stars:
awws! thanx so much!

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Hello there
The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim
Of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:~:blackrose:

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